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poems have been hard to write lately.
every time  i start to write the first words to come out are always 'you', or 'i', or 'love', or a combination of the three.
i think it's so confusing, and i find you everywhere, every song, ever raindrop, every smile.
           and you never see me.
of course, i know you're not looking for me anyway.
but {i wish} i could dream, couldn't i?

teenage fantasies of us run through my head like [a]pathetic lyrics.
i think of your lips on mine. warming them up.
and a tear falls down my cheek because a piece of me dies.

by the way, you have the most bestest hugs i have ever received.
so great i have to use improper grammar to describe them.
.....best word in the dictonary, next to 'you', of course.

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enjoy darlings!
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Freakomaniacadisical Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010
Hmm.. Good work. Congratulations on the DLD! :D
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Here, check
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Isolated Emotions? [link]
Juxtapositions [link]
Draw A Blank World [link]
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ToSeeAButterfly Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010   Photographer
thank you.
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2009   Writer
[link] Featured. :)
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ToSeeAButterfly Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2009   Photographer
second feature for this poem, how weird! Thanks!
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009   Writer
You're welcome. :aww:
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009   Writer
I love the play with pathetic and apathetic in your poem. Marvelous.
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ToSeeAButterfly Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009   Photographer
thank you very much.
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009   Writer
Yup! :D
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Isaac-Volpe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009
Nicely written, the last line was glorious.
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ToSeeAButterfly Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009   Photographer
thanks
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